Tell me what you think, I promise I won't bite...unless you want me to ;P
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FEEDBACK: Just Around The Corner (LoVe NC-17) |
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Posts: 9 (07/19/45 11:08:00) |
Last Edited By: mojo86love 04/08/08 03:26:25.
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Posts: 828 (04/09/08 18:23:22) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Excellent job with the smut! Very, very hot!!
I love that they're finally in a place where they both know they want to stay together and that they're it for each other. 
In a couple places, instead of a word, it just says "sth." I'm not sure what that's supposed to be, but I saw it two or three times.
Otherwise, everything was great |
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Posts: 10 (04/10/08 02:02:22) |
Aw,thanks so much jacedes,I'm glad you enjoyed it!
 That's how I imagine they future would go and I refuse to accept any other way!
Oh,yeah,sorry,when I was typing it I used abbreviations in some places (here it was 'something') and I forgot to correct it,thanks for pointing it
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Posts: 37 (04/10/08 16:20:09) |
I can't believe that this is only your second fic. The
was very hot. I'm glad that Mike got the message loud and clear at the end, it was so funny. But, it serves him right for trying to get
in the way of LoVe. Lol
Good job! I hope you continue to write more LoVe fics. |
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mojo86love |
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Posts: 11 (04/11/08 07:06:10) |
Thanks so much akami808 ,it really strokes my ego to read that you wouldn't tell it's only my 2nd fic
I'm really happy to hear that you liked the smut,I tried |
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Posts: 3 (04/13/08 09:16:38) |
Ah, I loved this. It was cute and funny. The smut was freakin' hot. Mike is such a dumbass. Did he really think he stood a chance with Veronica? I
hope you plan to write more stories. |
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Posts: 12 (04/14/08 13:01:44) |
Aww, thanks so much. I'm so excited that you liked it, and find my smut hot
Last Edited By: mojo86love
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And Mike SO deserved it,no one should EVER try to get in between LoVe!
I have some ideas floating in my head, so maybe
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