| Author | Comment | ||
|---|---|---|---|
JaneDtwo |
Feedback: Insisting On Love |
Lead | |
|
Much appreciated!
|
|||
Chandramas |
|||
|
I want to tell you WOW!
I love the way you are developing the LoVe even if we didn't exact have it... Logan's letter was touching and incredibly deep, and Veronica's reaction (and psychology) was perfect. And Veronica & Mac interaction? That's how I hoped it could be in the show! Write more soon!!! I want to read Logan's reaction to Veronica's mail (and of course Veronica's mail!!!) Chiara |
|||
JaneDtwo |
|||
|
Thank you, Chiara! I am writing the next one, and I promise it won't be as long coming as the previous update.
|
|||
vmfan06 |
Re: Feedback: Insisting On Love | ||
|
I'm embarrass to say this, but I'm in such an awe of this story and I want to comment on so many parts that I can't think straight. Lol So, for
now, I just want to tell you that this story is absolutely amazing. Please update soon and I'll be back with a more coherent reply.
|
|||
JaneDtwo |
|||
|
Thank you so much, vmfan06! And dont' worry, the mere fact that someone was reduced to incoherence by the story is the best feedback! LOL.
|
|||
obsessedlikeneverb4 |
Emotionally Drained | ||
|
So, from what I can tell, this is going to be one of those fics that the reader gets so emotionally drawn in to, that after you read it you just sit silently
for a while. This is one of those that will be so emotionally draining, that although you love the fic, you rarely go back there because you know how much of
an investment of your own psyche it will take to read through it. Already, I feel your writing to the depths of me. **Takes long, cleansing breath**
You must be exhausted by writing this and if you're not, I commend you. You have taken such care and patience in not just jumping through the story to get to the end result. The writing in this fic truly is about the journey, not where you end up. I don't know if this is making sense at all. I'm writing this at 3:47 a.m. my time so I don't claim clarity of message! Anyway, I really appreciate the effort you have put in thus far and look forward to the next update. I'm at a loss. How does Veronica prove herself after this? How is it that she gets Logan to look past all of the previous tries, when each time prior has ended in nothing, but V's self-righteous indignation? Even if she says all the right things, words, especially for Logan and especially after what they've already been through, mean so litte. Thanks, again!
Tuesday, my night to put the kids to bed, send the husband to the bedroom. Tuesday, my night to perch, anxiously awaiting the chime of 9:00. The calm, the excitement, the hour when all else fades and there is but one single focus. No jokes, no games, just the intense study of this thing we call LoVe.
Last Edited By: obsessedlikeneverb4
04/06/08 01:55:40.
Edited 1 times.
|
|||
JaneDtwo |
|||
YPL wrote: Thank you! And I moved your comment here. obsessedlikeneverb4, I absolutely love your feedback! Even if it does worry me, lol. Seriously, drained, elated, disturbed -- whatever emotion the writing evokes is great for the writer. Of course it might not be so great for the reader, but I can't help that. :lol Honestly, I am so grateful for the reaction that it makes me write twice as fast! I'm at a loss. How does Veronica prove herself after this?I am not very clear on that myself, but the simplest possible answer would be "very slowly and steadily." And it goes both ways. Both Logan and Veronica need to rebuild the trust, arrive at the place where they feel they can invest again without constantly waiting for the other shoe to drop. But then I always feel that if they can't do that with each other, they can't do it with anyone. And I sincerely don't want to think of them as doomed to loneliness, because they've been through so much, they deserve some happiness. In other words, the whole point of this epic exercise in emotional digging for them to reach that place. ... And, okay, now I feel even more overwhelmed. No wonder I'm leaving others drained! :lol
Last Edited By: JaneDtwo
04/11/08 10:33:01.
Edited 1 times.
|
|||
amulyagade |
Simply Love it! | ||
|
It is very very good...infact mind-blowing...
you definitely have a great knack at showcasing emotions on paper.... You clearly depicted each emotion, conflict of mind that went thru both logan and veronica.... My sincere request to you...Please Please continue writng this fic and finish it for us.... Thank You... |
|||