So what do ya think?
Feedback: Dreaming into Reality
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 libducky |
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Posts: 146 (06/23/05 16:30:16) Registered Member |
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blubuttrfly10 |
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Posts: 694 (10/06/95 10:19:58) A-Dohring Fan |
I think its great so far. Can't wait to see where you take this fic.
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LoVeLY |
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Posts: 703 (06/23/05 20:28:17) Logan|Sex&Snark |
I cannot wait to see where this is going, so far its very good.
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Silver |
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Posts: 1044 (06/24/05 09:47:41) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Great beginning!! Please continue!!
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PequenoP |
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Posts: 48 (06/24/05 19:15:08) Registered Member |
That was an awesome start. I can't wait to read more of what you have to write. I love your writing, that too is great.
Okay, yes, I am petite. And it does come in handy every now and then.
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libducky |
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Posts: 146 (06/25/05 17:42:01) Registered Member |
Thanks for all the great feedback. Being as this is my first VM fic I was a bit nervous.
You are so right, PequenoP, I'm about 5'1" and there are definite advantages in being petite. I'll be posting the second part tonight. |
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Silver |
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Posts: 1044 (06/25/05 19:02:57) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Yay!! Thanks for updating!
 Love the second part!
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Cherry Ryn |
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Posts: 177 (06/25/05 19:34:41) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Loving this!! I love how V realised that the hair of her mystery lover is that of Logan Echolls!!! Please continue soon!!
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sweetiepie1019 |
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Posts: 892 (06/25/05 20:14:43) LoVe Addicted |
Mmmm, dream LoVe making love. I like it. Now if only they would do it sans dream world ...
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merc4 |
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Posts: 148 (06/25/05 20:46:23) Logan|Sex&Snark |
This keeps getting better! Now that she knows she's been dreaming of Logan this whole time, I'm anxiously waiting to see what happens next
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PequenoP |
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Posts: 48 (06/25/05 22:22:31) Registered Member |
These updates are just way too short. I can't wait to see how this continues.
Okay, yes, I am petite. And it does come in handy every now and then.
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blubuttrfly10 |
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Posts: 694 (06/26/05 08:50:37) A-Dohring Fan |
Its nice to know that they were thinking of each other before the big kiss. Keep it coming!!
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libducky |
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Posts: 146 (06/28/05 18:32:34) Registered Member |
The next few parts will be really based on the show but there will be more in terms of the thoughts/feelings of our two characters. Thanks for all the feedback.
Next part will be up tonight. |
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blubuttrfly10 |
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Posts: 694 (06/28/05 19:02:30) A-Dohring Fan |
Great chapter! Can't wait to see their reactions to the kiss and the aftermath of it!!
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Queen haq |
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Posts: 259 (06/28/05 19:51:56) Registered Member |
This is really really good. I can't wait for the next chapter (I'm dying to see what L/V were thinking just before the second kiss in "hot dogs").
Awesome job! You must continue |
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merc4 |
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Posts: 148 (06/28/05 20:11:44) Logan|Sex&Snark |
My fangirl heart goes Squeeee!! I am loving this so much. Looking forward to the next part, cause more kissing
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PequenoP |
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Posts: 48 (06/28/05 20:49:57) Registered Member |
That was an awesome addition. I loved the way that you got into their heads.
(Long live short people!!!) Okay, yes, I am petite. And it does come in handy every now and then.
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LustyLuver |
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Posts: 1678 (06/29/05 00:13:12) LoVe Addicted |
I'm loving this story. I love how you inocoporate parts of the show also makes it definetly more realistic. Can't wait to read what happens next.
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scoobydoo4000 |
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Posts: 2 (07/05/05 11:58:40) |
Love this. Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
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LustyLuver |
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Posts: 1678 (09/10/05 23:09:25) LoVe Addicted |
Ooh this chapter makes me remember LoVe very first kiss *sigh* memories.
I love how you talked about Lily/Logan being jaded/broken and that's why Logan never acted on his feelings for Veronica because she was innocent/pure and he was far from it. I love how you also,described how Veronica took loosing Lily, and what Logan saw in her eyes. The way the kiss played out with Veronica thinking she was crazy and Logan questioning what was happening was excellent because its was just like on the show. They both looked shocked and confused to what was happening. I loved Logan twirling her around and seeing if his dream was closer to reality. The kiss was perfect but, you can't leave it there need more. Update again soon this story rocks.  Banner by Locoxlakristin!!! |
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blubuttrfly10 |
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Posts: 694 (09/11/05 08:37:30) A-Dohring Fan |
I loved this chapter as this was the episode that turned me onto LoVe. I love hearing about their reactions before the kiss and Logan wanting to know if it was like his dreams. Can't wait for more.
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