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Feedback : Iris : A flower by any other name
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Posts: 146 (08/28/05 01:41:40) Registered Member |
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Krissy215 |
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Posts: 700 (08/28/05 03:30:39) VMars|She's a Keeper |
I love your use of the song, especially when Logan shows Veronica his back. They are so gentle with each other - it's hard to imagine them NOT together.
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LustyLuver |
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Posts: 1678 (08/28/05 07:26:46) LoVe Addicted |
I loved that you used this song for the fic. It's such a beautiful song for a beautiful couple. Excellent story, I love how both needs to feel alive again with each other.
Wow the emotions were great, I especially love the scene when he lifted his shirt to show her his bruises, very powerful especially when she started to gently kiss his pain away. Again excellent story. I agree how can you not put LoVe together in everystory because they are amazing together.  |
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Diehard Candygirl |
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Posts: 200 (08/28/05 08:28:30) |
That was so well-written. Very realistic and simple
And I love that Logan was so gentle even though he didn't know the details beforehand. -- Liv
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Queen haq |
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Posts: 259 (08/28/05 08:58:19) Registered Member |
Oh libducky, this was just ... heartwarming and beautiful.
Her eyes tear up and one rolls down the side of her cheek. She is surprised when a hand wipes it away. She turns to see Logan staring intently at her. I loved the idea of Logan comforting her the way she did him. Great job! |
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cherrypiexo |
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Posts: 241 (08/28/05 09:05:17) |
I really loved every word in this fanfic. It was amazing. I wish it could go on longer. They have such an understanding for one another, it's adorable! Keep up the awsome work!
Stephanie 
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KoolChicka |
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Posts: 345 (08/28/05 11:03:07) Logan|Sex&Snark |
This was beautiful. The song went right with and it is a nice song.
I really enjoyed reading this. Wish it was longer.   LoVe is all we need to get by! I don't take credit for this sig |
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Posts: 88 (04/09/06 05:19:34) |
I wanted to read the Morning after: FLower Bloomer, but when I clicked on the link it said that the page could not be found. Can you send me a message with the link for that story or the actuall story itself. I really want to read more of this. Your fic Iris was awesome.
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