By the way cinaya19 I am assuming that Ted and Cecilia the couple who helped out Logan are in actual fact insert drum roll................................
Aaron and Kendal
Am I right seamstress4theband
Please give us more ASAP
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Shiny4LoVe |
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I am loving this and spent my day at working reading it. I need more. I really love the way you have carried the storyline through and the whole characterisation feels pretty spot on.
By the way cinaya19 I am assuming that Ted and Cecilia the couple who helped out Logan are in actual fact insert drum roll................................ Aaron and Kendal Am I right seamstress4theband Please give us more ASAP |
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seamstress4theband |
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you guys were curious and now you'll know..hehehe a little twist hope you like
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Shiny4LoVe |
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You are such a smart girl I am glad I kind of got it right the whole Trina thing really shocked me though but loving it at the same time.
Only thing I would say is it seemed a little rushed for your normal style. Definitely keep writing and bring us more ASAP. |
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seamstress4theband |
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thanks for the advise, you were definitely right, i needed to go back
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Shiny4LoVe |
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Definitely better, your writing is really good.
Loving the whole Aarons not your Daddy. Cant wait for more so hurry and bring it on. |
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jaded midnight |
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Yay, I'm happy that Veronica and Eric are over and that Aaron isn't really Logan's dad. I like all the twists. Can't wait for more Veronica and Logan time.
~Diana ![]() "Can you grant me one last wish? Play russian roulette as we kiss. I'll be your cheap novelty. Blow your brains out on me." |
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Shiny4LoVe |
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Ah finally where have you been. Loved it, the whole beach scene was really sweet.
I am hoping Will doesnt know Logan is his kid. I love your Logan by the way you really have him down pat. Really looking forward to more so dont take so long next time. Ever yours Shiny |
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neptunegoddess |
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Wow... just wow. Great chapter! I NEED MORE!!!
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raineyrain |
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I am glad to know that this story is back. Yay!
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LoVe09er |
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AHH! DON'T STOP THERE!!!!
Logan can't go to jail or anything! Good job so far though, UPDATE ASAP =] |
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seamstress4theband |
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anything??
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LoVe4ever666 |
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I loved this ending.
I have to say i was scared when I was reading the dream, because i could honestly see that happening. I liked that Veronica ended up being pregnant that was a twist in the story that worked. I am sad to see this being the end. I have been here reading this since the beginning and am glad to see it finished. Oh and I loved the name they picked at the end. GREAT JOB |
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seamstress4theband |
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i'm thinking about rewriting the ending. what do you guys think?
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Love the story. The relationship between Aaron, Trina, and Kendall pretty icky.
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