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feedback: A Night To Forget
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Posts: 66 (02/01/06 23:37:40) |
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Posts: 66 (02/01/06 23:47:08) |
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seamstress4theband |
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Posts: 66 (02/01/06 23:54:46) |
i figured it out...wow, i'm dumb
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jacedes |
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Posts: 830 (02/02/06 08:12:10) Logan|Sex&Snark |
A couple things: I like where the story is going so far, but you should try to find a beta. Betas can help with simple spelling and grammar mistakes that cause the story to not flow well. Also, people who don't read spoilers will have no idea who Hannah is or what happened with her. Sure, they can assume that she's a character you just made up, but you might want to put a spoiler warning explaining that some elements of your story haven't happened on the show yet. All that being said, I look forward to seeing what happens.
I will go down with this 'ship.
I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door, I'm in LoVe and always will be. |
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mary0112 |
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Posts: 645 (02/02/06 09:24:31) VMars|She's a Keeper |
I'm enjoying your story so far. While I do like the snarky Logan and V relationship, it's good to see a tender side sometimes. Looking forward to the next chapter
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weefeesmum |
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Posts: 107 (02/02/06 12:15:55) |
I agree with the comments so far. You have an excellent beginning and I feel that you have the relationships right. Looking forward to seeing where you are going to take them all.
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LoganLuver13 |
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Posts: 152 (02/02/06 13:27:55) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Yup Yup Yup, this fic is quite interesting! But uh, just in case, you might want take the font off of 'bold'. It's a little hard to read, therefore it takes longer. Gotta Love this story! No Hannah baby! Yeah! Can't wait for the next update!
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vmarsaddict |
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Posts: 42 (02/02/06 17:52:56) |
I love this story =D
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LoVeRocks14 |
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Posts: 80 (02/02/06 20:45:10) VMars|She's a Keeper |
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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ILive2LoVe142005 |
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Posts: 177 (02/02/06 21:01:51) LoVe Addicted |
This is pretty good. I wonder what will happen next. Can't wait for more!!!
~Kristin~ |
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ILive2LoVe142005 |
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Posts: 177 (02/05/06 19:56:02) LoVe Addicted |
This fic is very interesting. Loved the whole bar scene. My fav line was,
Quote:Can't wait for more, Update ASAP, Please! ~Kristin~ |
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mary0112 |
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Posts: 645 (02/05/06 20:57:03) VMars|She's a Keeper |
I love the fact that Logan is taking advantage of the situation by kissing V. She has to "keep up appearances," plus she is loving it touch. Can't wait to read more.
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gabs30 |
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Posts: 294 (02/06/06 14:29:28) |
I really like this story. I like that Veronica trusts that Logan will take care of her after realizing she was drugged. I can't wait for more. Update soon!
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MichelleSinger1940 |
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Posts: 206 (02/06/06 20:18:43) |
Oooh, this is getting good! Come back and update soon!
Nice car. That must've been a HUGE cereal box. -Logan Echolls
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LoVe4always |
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Posts: 51 (02/06/06 22:30:37) |
Great story!!! Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the next part.
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mary0112 |
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Posts: 645 (02/06/06 23:23:50) VMars|She's a Keeper |
I'm liking the story and can't wait for them to hook up. It has to happen. Thanks for the rapid updates.
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MichelleSinger1940 |
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Posts: 206 (02/07/06 05:49:04) |
Hmmm, how will the morning go? You have to post for us to find out! Hopefully Veronica wakes up feeling they way she did that night!
Nice car. That must've been a HUGE cereal box. -Logan Echolls
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mary0112 |
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Posts: 645 (02/08/06 11:53:25) VMars|She's a Keeper |
Umm..YES you are killing me with anticipation and I'm loving it
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MichelleSinger1940 |
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Posts: 206 (02/09/06 19:36:27) |
Just write the story you want to write and that you would want to read. We'll let you know what we think!
Nice car. That must've been a HUGE cereal box. -Logan Echolls
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MichelleSinger1940 |
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Posts: 206 (02/10/06 06:44:37) |
Jeez, you had to end it there? I want to know what happened to Logan. Post more soon!
Nice car. That must've been a HUGE cereal box. -Logan Echolls
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weefeesmum |
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Posts: 107 (02/10/06 10:24:08) |
Loving the story so far....But how could you leave it just there? Please please update soon.
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