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Feedback : The Kane Legacy
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Posts: 146 (10/15/05 20:53:46) Registered Member |
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LustyLuver |
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Posts: 1678 (10/15/05 21:47:06) LoVe Addicted |
Ooh liblucky, you must continue this. Awesome start.
  Logan to Veronica:FYI if the cuddling was the best part he didn't do it right! |
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Posts: 1044 (10/15/05 22:43:34) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Thats a great start! What will she say to Logan?
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KoolChicka |
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Posts: 345 (10/15/05 23:10:27) Logan|Sex&Snark |
ITA!! Good start can't wait till more.
 Thanks LustyLuver!! |
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MYLOGAN |
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Posts: 1824 (10/16/05 00:09:38) |
I can't wait to read more of this. Please update SOOON!
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pegm81484 |
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Posts: 498 (10/16/05 04:10:38) |
Aww thats so sad and I'm really interested in where this story is going, are Logan and Veronica going to gain custody of the boys??? Hmm... also I was wondering, did Duncan and Meg have 2 or 3 boys?
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DragmaticNirvana |
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Posts: 127 (10/16/05 08:19:50) |
Ohh, so sad. I hate it when Meg dies. :
 out::Nice car. That must've been a HUGE cereal box. -Logan Echolls
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sucker4LoVe |
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Posts: 343 (10/16/05 13:55:57) A-Dohring Fan |
OMG, this is so sad, those poor kids. Update soon!
 Thank you LustyLover, YOU ROCK GIRL! |
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jacedes |
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Posts: 830 (10/16/05 16:15:33) Logan|Sex&Snark |
How depressing! I look forward to seeing where you go with this
 I will go down with this 'ship.
I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door, I'm in LoVe and always will be. |
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LustyLuver |
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Posts: 1678 (10/16/05 21:13:04) LoVe Addicted |
Lib, I loved this chapter.
Aww the funerals going to be so sad. I can't wait to see what happens with that. I love how Veronica realized Meg/Duncan belonged together and that Duncan wasn't over Meg. I also loved how Veronica locked them in the poolhouse so they could work out their problems. I love Duncan/Meg's attempts to get LoVe back toghether. I love how Veronica misses Logan, and how they snuck off to the beach in the flasbhacks and were drinking have fun.Aww I loved Veronica telling Logan she wished that she didn't break up with him. The kiss was amazing, and then it was cute with them holding each other and falling asleep. Aww poor Logan crying but hiding it. Amazing chapter.Can't wait for more. Logan to Veronica:FYI if the cuddling was the best part he didn't do it right! |
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Posts: 1044 (10/16/05 21:13:46) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Hehe, Veronica trying to get Duncan and Meg together. Then Meg and Duncan trying to get LoVe together.
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DragmaticNirvana |
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Posts: 127 (10/16/05 22:30:22) |
I LOVED how Veronica broke up with Duncan. "By the way, I'm breaking up with you." Priceless.
But...the beach, and...what happened after that? Why'd they break up...again? Nice car. That must've been a HUGE cereal box. -Logan Echolls
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wickedshizit |
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Posts: 92 (10/17/05 02:39:51) |
I love how Veronica got Meg and Duncan back together. Update soon!
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pegm81484 |
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Posts: 498 (10/17/05 03:52:24) |
Awww, that was heartbreaking... obviously when they woke up things didn't go so smoothly since she dodged him at the airport. I'm excited to see where this story goes.
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leoness8178 |
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Posts: 446 (10/17/05 04:29:24) |
Ok, I have been very lax in my feedback lately...and for that I am sorry. I read the first part a couple of days ago and loved it...But the second part rocked my socks...Such a powerful set of flashbacks...Keep going. I can't wait to hear what V has to say about Donut and Meg and to really, really meet their boys!
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MYLOGAN |
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Posts: 1824 (10/17/05 05:13:41) |
Evil...you're evil...how could you leave us hanging this way? I love your new fic and I can't wait to see Veronica face Logan.
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jacedes |
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Posts: 830 (10/17/05 05:27:54) Logan|Sex&Snark |
The flashbacks were great, but what happened with Veronica and Logan that they either didn't get back together or didn't stay together? Anxious for more!
I will go down with this 'ship.
I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door, I'm in LoVe and always will be. |
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blubuttrfly10 |
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Posts: 694 (10/17/05 22:20:31) A-Dohring Fan |
I love that Meg and Duncan set Veronica and Logan up to go to prom. Hurry up and write more so we can find out what happened between them. Not to mention what happens with Meg/Duncan's kids, are Veronica and Logan going to take care of them? Can't wait for more!
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LustyLuver |
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Posts: 1678 (10/18/05 20:37:20) LoVe Addicted |
Lib, another excellent chapter. OMG can I kill Vanessa she is like the flippin energizer bunny she keeps going and going
 I loved that Logan and Veronica communicated through emails, and that Duncan/Meg helped the processs. UGH Vanessa's got to go she is so ugh.Eww she was all on Logan and poor Veronica having to lie about a guy named Peter. Ooh the scene in the car and at the airport that's angst at its finest. I loved how Logan really wanted to spend time with Veronica but couldn't because he had to work. HOLY WOWZA that kiss was so hot, I loved how Logan just cornered Veronica and then she was lost. I loved him telling her to dump Peter.Stupid Vanessa. Aww they both really want each other, its so sad. Ooh I can't wait for the wedding and erruption of emotions (LoVe hotness can feel it already) Update soon. Need more of this story.  Logan to Veronica:FYI if the cuddling was the best part he didn't do it right! |
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MYLOGAN |
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Posts: 1824 (10/18/05 20:50:19) |
You can't leave me like this. Please tell me that you have the next chapter written and you'll be posting tomorrow...please. This is great...I can't wait.
I wanted Veronica to punch Vanessa out....grrr |
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Silver |
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Posts: 1044 (10/18/05 20:55:45) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Ohh we should gang up on Vanessa!! I hate her! I can't wait till the next chapter!
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