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carlyhope |
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I like it a lot. I like the relationship between Logan and Veronica - so close. And I like strong Lynn. Really curious how it will work out.
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LoVeSpuffy |
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Love that Lynn is actually being a mother in this fic, and that Logan was the one to state what their relationship was. And, of course, the LoVe was perfect.
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Chandramas |
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This story is amazing!!! GOOD JOB! I love each chapter a little more! Thanks so much for sharing this! Chiara Aka Chan |
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LoVevmars |
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I liked this chapter. I love the way handle each situation you throw at the characters and how perfectly you match up their personalities. Keep up the good work, I can't wait until the next chapter.
Tiera
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wickeddiva422 |
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Yay! You updated. I am really liking this story a lot and I can't wait to see the confrontation with Duncan. Please update soon.
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sweepmeoffmyfeet |
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I hate it because now I have to wait for the next chapter!
Update soon please! ![]() Banner by me (sweepmeoffmyfeet) |
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LoVeSpuffy |
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Yay, so glad to see this updated!!! I love this story so much.
The scene in the bedroom with the condoms was hilarious. Loved the Lynn/Logan interactions. Loved the kissing. Great work. ![]() |
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lapdogdesign34 |
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Glad to see you're updating! I too thought Veronica's reaction to the condoms (and Logan's reaction to HER reaction) was really sweet. And you've got me on pins and needles about what is going to happen with Duncan...I'm guessing big sister told him the secret! Eeek! More, please!
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LoVesMeSomeLogan |
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This....This story is quite awsome! hehe
I really like the way they talk to each other and their interactions are adorable. The kissing, the hand holding, the whispering- mostly I really loved Logan's "Thank God" when he asked her about keeping the relationship hidden...lol. Really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work. |
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marsficgirl |
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Great chapter, can't wait for more. Please let Veronica tell Lily off. I love how you show her sticking up for herself.
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LoVeSpuffy |
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Ah, the bitch has arrived. Excellent chapter.
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DramastarOF06 |
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You posted!! I loved it, soo good. I like how Duncan reacted, all angry and such because I really do not like the Donut. I love the Logan and Veronica relationship. I hope you post more soon, this story is so well written.
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stellakeeffe |
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Definitely loving this. Just discovered this story and I really like the way you're building Logan & Veronica's relationship. I LOVE the way you're writing Veronica's character...bringing in some of the strength she had post-Lilly's murder from the show. It's very believable as a result of her blinders being pulled off by catching Lilly with Aaron. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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LoVesMeSomeLogan |
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Awsome yet again! That whole 'getting to second base' part?
Anyway, this chapter was soo cute and it really helped make their relaitonship seem more real. I don't know how to describe it- it just made it come alive for me. You're doing great! |
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LoVesMeSomeLogan |
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I'm back!
This chapter made me smile and giggle. It was so cute! I love how they are both so excited to 'hang out' together. Logan is acting so aDORKable (that wasn't a typo btw)! I really love this whole idea! The whole idea of being love with your best friend has always been a weak spot for me. Mostly because I can't imagine being with someone that isn't a wonderful friend. Anyway, you're doing great! Logan's mom and their list was a nice undertone to add. Aaron's an Keep going! It's good stuff! |
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Bestelle20 |
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Just came across this story and had to tell you how much I loved it! Interesting twist of events you have here, Lilly is quite a frightening bitch, I guess you still have some plot twists up in your sleeve about her..
And it's also a great thing that you have made Lynn a good mother. You made us understand how she could stand by and not do anything to protect her son, and though I still don't forgive her, at least you justified ita nd showed us her side of the story. And at least she is taking action now! Better late than never! and I also love that she is not the jaded broken, alcoholic shell of a mother that she was shown on TV, but that she's a caring, kind, loving, full of life woman. I really like your writing style, it is flowing, and you make a great storyteller! So please post more soon! |
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XOLoganXO |
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Totally loving your story! I love where you started the story, Lily being alive and such a bitch (I have always thought that about her). Keep 'em coming, we are all waiting for more!
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GotChikinSoop |
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Wow, it's been awhile so I had to read back a little to find out which story it was. Either way, I enjoyed your update. Please don't make us wait this long again.
~~~Chikinsoop is good for the soul!~~~
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daria103 |
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I'm so glad you're continuing this story, I love pre-season/season 1 fic. It's really well written, it flows really well. When I saw the update I ended up re-reading the whole piece and I love it even more now.
I like that you have Lynn stepping up and being a good mother and that you rounded out her reasons for not doing so in the past. I'm always in two minds about Lilly in fic. I don't know if I prefer her helping LoVe get together or being a bitchy obstacle for them to overcome. I kind of think how she was portrayed in canon would fit either scenario. You definitely got the bitchy, selfish aspect of her personality down perfectly. I can really picture this Lilly in canon. |
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obsessedlikeneverb4 |
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Love it. I loved when Logan told Duncan that he wasn't going to feel bad that he realized what a stupid mistake Duncan made by dumping V. hilarious!!!
Tuesday, my night to put the kids to bed, send the husband to the bedroom. Tuesday, my night to perch, anxiously awaiting the chime of 9:00. The calm, the excitement, the hour when all else fades and there is but one single focus. No jokes, no games, just the intense study of this thing we call LoVe.
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