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Feedback: History of Abuse
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 Aurelia87 |
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Posts: 26 (05/07/07 17:38:12) |
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bklyangel |
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Posts: 88 (05/07/07 18:51:15) |
More please!!!!!
I think I like where this is going |
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reviewgiver |
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Posts: 41 (05/07/07 22:07:15) |
Do continue.
 And I love on how you describe Lilly. That would be so her. Hoping for more. 
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jcalla |
Yay. | ||
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Posts: 19 (05/10/07 07:12:36) |
I love this. I can't wait to see where you take it. More Please.
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bklyangel |
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Posts: 88 (05/17/07 09:17:46) |
Please update!!!!
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jcalla |
Love it. | ||
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Posts: 19 (05/24/07 23:03:18) |
I love this. Please continue.
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Aurelia87 |
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Posts: 26 (05/24/07 23:47:11) |
Hey guys, thanks for the reviews. I am not abandoning this story. Life just kinda got in the way.
I have the first half of the next chapter written, but I'm having trouble with the second half. I'm not going to promise to have it finished by a certain date, but I do promise that I will be updating. I just need it to be right and good. I don't want to put out a rushed piece of crap you know. lol Again thanks for the reviews. |
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GotChikinSoop |
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Posts: 89 (07/31/07 23:11:13) |
That was a totally intense chapter. I thought you portrayed Logan's fear perfectly.
 More please!~~~Chikinsoop is good for the soul!~~~
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jacedes |
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Posts: 830 (08/01/07 06:13:23) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Wow. That was just chilling. You did such an excellent job of getting across exactly what Logan was feeling, because I felt it too! It makes me want to cry for Logan
 I will go down with this 'ship.
I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door, I'm in LoVe and always will be. |
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daria103 |
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Posts: 86 (08/01/07 07:44:18) |
That chapter was really well written and totally intense. The first time I watched season 1 I managed to miss the episode with the bum fights and the belt scene but I still found Aaron really creepy throughout. You've written Aaron with that dominant, controlling vibe that made him so creepy. I think the way you've written it could fit into canon, I can almost picture this as a Logan flashback.
I can't wait to see where you take this story. |
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daria103 |
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Posts: 86 (08/27/07 12:30:39) |
Another great chapter, I'm really glad you came back to this story. I liked the little fluffy moment in there, it lightened it up a bit. I really like the premise of this story, it's interesting to see Logan and Veronica deal with some issues.
Looking forward to seeing more of this. |
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