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Logans4ever |
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What do you think?
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LoVe09er |
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Wow. Just...wow.
I've actually never read a fic like this before. I know that everyone's fics are original, but a lot of them are VERY similiar. haha...and this one-this one is just brilliant!!! I can't wait to see everyones reactions and EVERYTHING. I hope you write really, really long chapters =]]] lol GREAT JOB INTRODUCING IT SO FAR!!! UPDATE ASAP !!!!! please?!!? |
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mbrooker |
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Love it. Love it. Love it. Logan and V pretending to date is an awesome idea. I did seem to be a little fast, with Logan all of a sudden coming up with it, especially when he really seems to hate Veronica that episode. But I really love the concept and can't wait to see what happens. Please update again soon!
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Verogan |
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THAT WAS INCREDIBLE. I love it, want more,please give me more.
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reviewgiver |
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You have such a nice plot! I can't wait for the next chapter! :P
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lovelogan1 |
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I love the idea of this story! Logan and Veronica will be forced to get to know each other again and fall in love. Maybe they can sleep together and she can get pregnant!
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09er |
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Haha this is great!
Can't wait for more. |
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lapdogdesign34 |
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Excellent start. I don't think I've ever read a fic that started from this moment in canon...I'm really interested to see how Logan and Veronica's perceptions about each other (and feelings for each other) change while they're 'pretend dating'.
Can't wait for more. Please update soon! |
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Shiny4LoVe |
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Got to second what everyone has said. This is a great first chapter and a nice twist on canon.
I am hoping that we are going to get some good snark going between them. You write great snark. Hurry with the next chapter. ![]() Honestly, how much easier would your life be if you were indifferent to me? |
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What does it all mean |
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I really like the set up of this story. One chapter in and you've already set the basic plotline. V and Logan pretending to date to get a reaction out of Duncan, it sounds explosive Please update soon
Bye, ![]() i5.photobucket.com/albums/y200/poodlesista/actions.jpg
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sweepmeoffmyfeet |
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I love the synopsis of your story. It seems very intresting, I like your chapter and I hope you update soon.
![]() ANGEL:In two-hundred-forty-three years, I've loved exactly one person. |
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SwayWithMe |
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Love it! I cannot wait to see how you pan this one out. More soon!
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jacedes |
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Very interesting premise. I've never read a fic that started from this point before. I look forward to seeing how good of actors they can be, considering they couldn't stand each other at this point in canon.
I will go down with this 'ship.
I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door, I'm in LoVe and always will be. |
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ShyNatalie |
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Great Start!!!
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EchollsLoVer |
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Well, that's a very good start! Keep it up please!! I can't wait to read more. And I think everyone else would agree with me on that. Update ASAP. I've always liked the idea of Logan and Veronica pretending to date and then actually falling for each other. I can't wait to see how Wallace, Duncan, Dick, Troy, and others react. Is Veronica still going to save Lilly's murder and her rape? Is she going to find out she was 'raped' by Donut or raped by Cassidy? I want more now!! Please update!- EchollsLoVer
Veronica, you gotta love Logan! He's snarkastic! |
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EchollsLoVer |
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Sorry, I accidentally added my feedback to the story! But I went back and deleted it, or at least tried to.- EchollsLoVer
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Logans4ever |
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No problem. I've done that before too.
Thanks to everyone for all the feedback, I'm going to update very soon, maybe even tonight. I want to update both my stories at the same time though cause it's just not fair to put my other fic on the back burner. -Logans4ever |
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reviewgiver |
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That is so bad ending it there. MORE! MORE! :)
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cheery and tutorgirl |
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i agree with reviewgiver so bad ending it there add soon love
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lapdogdesign34 |
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This was a fun chapter...I could see Veronica coming up with a believable plan and then Logan just saying "Screw that" and doing it his way. Plus Logan's way means lots of explaining to the friends and disbelieving stares from everyone, which is more awkward and more fun to read, LOL.
Wallace's reaction was awesome, and I loved how he squeezed her hand in support. He's one of my favorite people. There is so much potential for L/V feelings to start developing...can't wait for more. Update soon, please! |
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Shiny4LoVe |
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Got to agree with Lapdogdesign34 this was such a typical Logan reaction. His way is always best. I loved the below line
Quote: Poor V she totally would have felt like that at that point in time and I felt really bad for her with the whole Troy confrontation. Quote: Yep Logan it really is that unbelievable, I just thought that was really funny its like he had this great idea and thought it was going to be easy as pie to carry through. It makes you wonder how much he really thinks he has hurt and humiliated V over the last year. I hope you are going to make him feel appropriately guilt. Hope your teeth are better and we get a longer update soon. ![]() Honestly, how much easier would your life be if you were indifferent to me? |
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