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logansmytvboyfriend |
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Feedback is adored like woobie Logan.
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alee23 |
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There aren't many post S3 Vm stories out there, your is up to a good start - I can't wait to see where you take this next!
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jacedes |
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I'm really enjoying this so far. I was so sad that Logan had gotten to the point where he was convinced he and Veronica would never work, but it looks like, with Charlie's help, he'll change his mind. Plus, it seems like Logan and Veronica really are building a close friendship, and if Veronica can trust him as a friend, which I hope Logan will see, then she can eventually trust him with her heart. And hopefully, vice versa. I know Veronica does love him. Logan's just been hurt too many times to let himself believe it. Update soon!
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wickeddiva422 |
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I like this story. I really like how you have developed Charlie and Logan's relationship. Good job. Please update soon.
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jcalla |
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I'm really loving this. Please continue. I love that you created such great tension between Logan and Veronica. I can't wait for the pay off.
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obsessedlikeneverb4 |
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okay, so yeah....love the story so far. I can't wait to read more! Ugh! Logan and Veronica kill me, but it's good. I can see Veronica finally being supportive and encouraging Logan. Not constantly putting him down.
Argh! I have all of these scenarios running through my head of how Logan will finally let her back in and the events leading up to his revelation. Thanks for the story! Tuesday, my night to put the kids to bed, send the husband to the bedroom. Tuesday, my night to perch, anxiously awaiting the chime of 9:00. The calm, the excitement, the hour when all else fades and there is but one single focus. No jokes, no games, just the intense study of this thing we call LoVe.
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akami808 |
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Ah, I felt so bad for Logan, thinking that he's not good enough for Veronica and that they won't work. I'm enjoying this story a lot. I haven't read much fics that feature Charlie and I liked how you got them together. It's nice that Logan finally has some family. Please update soon!
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finajk |
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Oh, I'm liking this a lot. More, more!
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copelandloverx |
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I love this so far! I really wish that this was how it went. I love the Charlie/Logan relationship and the very supportive Veronica. So should we be seeing more of this friends status between the two? Some confrontation? Or them finally getting together? I can't wait!!! I really hope you continue this. VM fics are becoming scarce and I'd hate to see this unfinished /:
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logansmytvboyfriend |
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Thanks everyone for the feedback. I hope the latest chapter meets your expectations. Keep the comments coming, it definitely helps the writing process.
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akami808 |
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I'm really loving this story. Woohoo, for MaDi setting up Logan & Veronica. I love MaDi, they make a good team and they're so funny together. Loved how Mac called herself Mrs. Dick, too bad they couldn't stay together unlike Logan and Veronica. I'm so happy that Logan & Veronica got back together and that Veronica finally opened up to Logan, it's about time. And ahh, I loved how Veronica told Logan that she can't let him go.
I can't wait for the next part. By the way, what do you mean by the rest of the chapters not being as long?! You're doing a great job with this. Keep it up. |
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jacedes |
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Awesome chapter! I'm so happy that Veronica was completely honest with Logan about her feelings for once. He really needed to hear all of that, and I think as long as they keep being honest and open with each other, they can make it work. I loved that Logan admitted he still loved her and that his attitude about them working out had changed awhile ago. I melted when Veronica admitted she couldn't be without him
Loved the Mac/Dick stuff too. I hope that they get closer as well, although they're kind of doing things backwards |
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vmfan06 |
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First, I would like to say that Im one of those readers who pretty much do not leave feedback to stories I read. Its awful, I know, sorry. Secondly, I really dont read season 3 or post season 3 stories, just because I cant stand the thought of Piz and Parker having to do with anything related to Veronica and Logan. Plus, I hated season 3 with a passion. But, a friend of mine (akami808) recommended that I read this story. Boy, Im glad I did. This story is absolutely amazing.
Part 1 I'm not a big fan of the angst. But, this I could live with. Lol It's so heartbreaking that Logan doesn't think he's good enough for Veronica or that their relationship wont work. And I really felt bad for Veronica trying to hold on by telling him she loved him. Too bad it was out of desperation after Logan was rejecting her, but I was glad that he stood his ground and didnt go after her. He was right; they would have been miserable jumping right back into the relationship. They both need time to mature and for Veronica to really open up to him. Part 2 Absolutely loved this chapter to pieces. I loved that you brought Charlie into the picture and had him reach out to Logan. It was sad that Logan was having a hard time because Charlie reminded him of Aaron. But, Im glad that he took Veronicas advice and decided to give Charlie a chance. And the bonding over video games was so funny, especially when Charlie brought up Veronica. Hopefully, with Charlies help, Logan will see that Veronica really does love him. After all, it seems that theyve started to develop a really close friendship. Part 3 Yay, a LoVe reunion with a MaDi marriage. Aside from LoVe, I love MaDi. This chapter was awesome. Finally, Veronica opened up and was honest with Logan. I thought this would never ever happen. And it was so cute when she told him that she couldnt let him go. Im so glad that they got back together and with the help of Mac and Dick to boot. Its just too bad that MaDi got divorce. I hope they continue to grow closer. Ok, now I know why I dont leave feedback. I talk way too much. Lol I cant wait until the next chapter, which I hope is coming soon. |
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logansmytvboyfriend |
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Dudes, I'm loving you all for the awesome feedback! I'm going to try to do better and respond to all of the replys so I'll start tonight:
akami808: Glad you're loving the MaDi. They kinda hit me sideways, but I really love writing them together. I'm debating with myself if they'll end up together - but they're so funny together, so we'll see ;) Sorry about the upcoming shorter chapters, part 2 and 3 totally went out of control on me that's why they ended up so long. jacedes: It always bothered me that Veronica never let Logan in on what she was thinking/feeling so it was nice to finally put it out there. Logan deserves to hear it afterall. Thanks so much for your feedback, hope you'll enjoy the upcoming chapters too. vmfan06: Dude, I think it's safe to say that all writers love feedback, but especially long thoughtful feedback! I'm so glad that you gave my fic a chance. I'll be honest with you, I totally accused my bff/beta Tanya of writing your comments because you sound exactly like her with the hating of Season 3/Parker/Piz/angst, lol. I really appreciate you taking the time to respond, writers love it and it definetly feeds the muse. Seriously, all of you, thanks for the feedback, it means a lot and keep it coming :) |
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finajk |
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Yea! great update!
(sorry so short - gotta run) |
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alee23 |
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Awesome - an update! I'm loving this story and can't wait for more!
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akami808 |
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Nice update, I liked it a lot. I'm glad that, even though he seemed hesitant, Keith gave them his blessing to move in together. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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vmfan06 |
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Great update! I'm loving the LoVe. LOL, to the Supernatural reference, I love that show. I can't wait for the next update.
Quote:LOL, I'm sure that must of been a fun discussion. |
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jacedes |
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I love that they're so domestic and comfortable around each other! And she moved in! Yay!
Also, as soon as I read the "don't objectify me" line, I thought of Dean |
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akami808 |
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Hi, are you still continuing this story? It's been awhile since an update. I'd hate to see it go unfinished, it's one of my favorite fics and one
of the only reasons I check the board daily.
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logansmytvboyfriend |
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My peeps, sorry about the long delay in posting. I was having problems with the latest part, but I think I managed to smooth them out. Thanks again for all the
feedback, it inspires me to push harder.
finajk and allee23 - Thanks for popping in, glad you liked the update and I hope you liked the latest one too! akami808 - Don't worry, I have no intention of letting this one go unfinished. It might take me a bit longer than I orginally thought, but trust me, it'll get finished vmfan06 - Glad that you liked the last part. Hopefully there wasn't too much angst for you in this newest one jacedes - Logan and Veronica all domesticated makes me sigh like a girly girl - it's awesome! And babe, keep on dreaming about the smut, lol. I wrote a chapter once in another fandom and I don't think I can write it in any story ever again ;) Thanks again everyone! Hopefully it won't take me another month to post the next part
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