I don't know what problems you were having, but this was definitely smoothed out. & the ending with Logan figuring Dick was jealous - hi-larious!
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Yay - Update!
I don't know what problems you were having, but this was definitely smoothed out. & the ending with Logan figuring Dick was jealous - hi-larious! |
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Yay, you updated and you intend to finish the story. I'm so happy. Like finajk said, I don't know what
problems you were having, but this was a great chapter. I'm so glad that Logan and Veronica didn't break up or even consider breaking up because of
the FBI thing. They really handled the situation maturely, it's kind of amazing. And Dick is just too funny, especially when he's all jealous, he so
wants to be with Mac.
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I hate that Logan and Veronica are apart, but at least they didn't break up. I love Logan's surf shop idea, so I hope he really decided to do it.
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Dude. I totally forgot to reply to this story. I read it and then I got distracted. Mmkay so, I freaking love all your stories. You characterize
L&V so well. I especially loved "Sometimes the Last Thing You Want Is Just What You Need" and despite your obvious need to shorten your titles (haha), it's pretty much one of the best oneshots i've ever read. Keep it up! Your stories make me smile... and then I realize Veronica Mars is cancelled. Stupid CW. Love, Logan is my Lovah |
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Aw, V&L are going to be apart for two yrs. Wow, um that's a long time. I felt kind
of sad for V when L said he didn't want to move. I really like how you've developed these two, and especially V.
She's really come along way and it showed when she didn't just make the decision to go on her own, and made the decision with him. And I hope he opens his surf shop. He does need to do something while he waits for V to come home. Did I mention two yrs is
a long time? Lol So, no there was not too much angst for me. I'm not opposed to angst.
I can enjoy it, if it's not stupid, like this one story over at a livejournal, which it will not be appropriate for me to mention. Lol Oh, loved the
jealous Dick part. Update soon, ok!
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logansmytvboyfriend |
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Hey all, hope y'all enjoyed the latest part!
finajk - Glad you didn't notice my 'smoothing' issues I had going on. Believe me, it was a bitch to get the chapter to how I wanted it to be, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it! akami808 - Don't ever worry this one won't be finished - not gonna happen jacedes - I never had any intention of them being away that long, lol, that would've been torture for us all. Logan is my lovah - I'm so glad you loved 'Sometimes', I'm really proud of that one and I know that title was way too long vmfan06 - Veronica staying static in their relationship or by herself makes no sense to me, so the only logical thing to do is have her evolve along the way. I always believed that Logan and Veronica would have been able to work out their issues, it was just a matter of them actually talking it out, you know? Thanks again for all the feedback everyone, hope you all enjoyed the latest update |
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Great update! Glad that Veronica's back and Logan opened his store.
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I'm so glad that Veronica is permanently back in Neptune. I hated the thought of them being apart for so long. And very cool that Logan's surf shop is
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Cute chapter. I'm glad that Logan opened his store. And I agree w/jacedes, I'm happy Veronica is back home. The two years apart would have been just
too long.
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This is ten kinds of awesome!!! I LoVe it and I can't wait for more!! Update soon!
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LoVesMeSomeLogan |
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I heart this fic! I really love to read it and I can't wait to read more. I love the subtle build up between the characters. And...LoVe....*sigh*
Very fun. |
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Hey everyone,
Sorry about the long delay in posting. I was debating where to go with the story and after much conflict, I decided to just follow my original outline (thanks Tanya). Anyways, I hope you enjoy the next part! akami808, jacedes, vmfan06 - yeah, I can't imagine Logan and Veronica being apart for two years especially after what they've been through. Plus, I could never picture Veronica actually in the FBI - weird. But I can totally picture Logan with a surf shop, lol. lovesepic - glad you enjoyed the chapter, hope you feel the same about the newest one! LoVesMeSomeLogan - thanks so much for posting and I'm happy that you're enjoying the story. Can't ask for more than that Thanks again everyone for the feedback. Keep it coming and I really hope you liked the latest part |
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I'm sorry I haven't commented before this, but I really think this story is amazing. You are approaching Logan & Veronica and their relationship
the way I wished the show had. I love the path you've taken them on. Your story is incredibly well written as well. This last chapter was sweet, funny
and felt very believable. I can't wait for more!!
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logansmytvboyfriend |
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Spygrrl76 - Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm really happy that you are enjoying the story. The whole intention of this story was to
show everyone how the series could have ended. So, I'm glad to know that others feel the same as me.
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akami808 |
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I really enjoyed this chapter. I think LoVe's reaction to the news that she's having a baby is just what it would have been like on the show, its very
believable. This story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait more.
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logansmytvboyfriend |
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Thanks for the feedback akami808. I think you touched on one of the things I'm trying to do with this story - keep it believable, lol. As
much as LoVe squeeing over having a baby would be schoompy and cute, it just doesn't feel right, at least not right now. Thanks again for reading, working
on the next chapter as I type
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vmfan06 |
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Great chapter! I have to say, I agree w/akami! You played off Logan and Veronica's reaction to the baby news really believable. Its just
too bad that V doesn't want to get married. But, she wouldn't be V if she accepted the proposal.
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logansmytvboyfriend |
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vmfan06 -- thanks for your reply. I think Veronica is nuts for refusing Logan's proposal. Such a silly girl |
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spygrrl76 |
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Thanks for the update. The name thing was very funny and cute. And poor Veronica reading that journal article and getting all wound up about it. Hee.
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Thanks for the update. Loved the bracelet scene. Veronica was so funny at the doctors office.
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