Well, here's a new one...hope you all enjoy!
Feedback: Pan High Rules
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Posts: 243 (03/04/08 23:55:56) |
Tuesday, my night to put the kids to bed, send the husband to the bedroom. Tuesday, my night to perch, anxiously awaiting the chime of 9:00. The calm, the excitement, the hour when all else fades and there is but one single focus. No jokes, no games, just the intense study of this thing we call LoVe.
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Posts: 47 (03/05/08 01:01:30) |
Honestly, it was about time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 I've been waiting for this since ever! (call it this 'ever' one year).
It's great story! I can't wait to read it! You rocks, girl!!!!! |
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Posts: 10 (03/05/08 02:10:38) |
Yes! I was waiting for this it seems like forever! Love the premise. Did Veronica get pregnant during Shelley's? Don't answer that! I'm just
speculating.
Can't wait for the next part!  )
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Posts: 57 (03/05/08 06:05:40) |
Whee! You're back!
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Posts: 822 (03/05/08 07:20:09) Logan|Sex&Snark |
I'm so excited that you're writing another story, and I love this already! I'm interested to know why Veronica hasn't been there and why
she's going by Cami. Is her middle name Camille? It's awesome how everyone loves her, and I can't wait for Logan's reaction when he finds out
that the school's darling is Veronica. Will he treat her differently and offend all of his new friends or will he start over with her? Please update soon!
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Posts: 73 (03/05/08 12:25:43) |
Love that you're posting a new fic. I can't believe you're going to make us wait a week between updates, but I guess we do have to let you write it
before posting lol.
Interesting start, I had assumed (from the title) that Veronica was attending Pan but I thought there would somehow be conflict with the old Neptune crowd, never guessed that you would have Logan at Pan too. Great idea. i can't wait to see how this pans out (no pun intended) and expecially how Logan reacts when Veronica shows up. I'm also looking forward to more backstory, why Veronica is going by Cami, why she wasn't in school the first week. Great start, looking forward to more. |
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Posts: 111 (03/05/08 16:42:59) |
I really liked this, I love that alot of the main characters are still in it, like Mac and Wallace, I get that Cami is Veronica, the only thing I don't see
is how you got Cami from Veronica.
This was really great, can't wait for more. ~Shelley |
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Posts: 22 (03/11/08 06:46:25) |
i am really glad to see a new story up! I thought alot of people had given up on writing Vmars fanfic so its awesome that you are posting something new. I
loved Drunk Logan and i'm looking forward to reading this story as it progresses. I like what you have so far. Logan and Veronica both at Pan High, along
with Wallace, is an interesting dynamic. I am also curious, like other people, why she calls herself Cami. And why she missed the first week of school? and
Logan mentions her breasts are bigger. and i doubt V had money for a boob job. who knows. i thought maybe she had a kid. really looking forward to reading what
happens and finding out more of the back story. post more soon!
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Posts: 11 (03/11/08 08:24:01) |
Loved the new chapter! I'm pretty sure I know what's up with Veronica, although I don't know why she's going by Cami. I can't wait to see
how you continue this! I hope you'll have time to update with chapter 3 soon!
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Posts: 823 (03/11/08 09:37:39) Logan|Sex&Snark |
Love this chapter. I'm thinking that Veronica has a kid, maybe the Keith they were talking about? I love how confused and out of his element Logan is. And
the role reversal is great. Logan's reputation and future happiness at Pan are completely in Veronica's hands. I look forward to more interaction
between Logan and Veronica, maybe even a one-on-one conversation.
One thing puzzled me: why did no one think it was strange when Cami said she and Logan had gone to school together and Logan hadn't recognized her from everyone talking about her? And nobody asked any questions after they were introduced. I would have wanted to know all about it if I were Mac or Wallace. I hope you're able to update soon, though it sounds like you're super-busy. |
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Posts: 76 (03/11/08 11:53:45) |
Great chapter. When I got to the part about Logan thinking she had a boob job I started wondering if she was pregnant but now with everyone's reviews
I'm leaning towards her already having a child. In your fic has the rape still happened or did Veronica leave Neptune High before it got to that?
Loved, loved, loved her indifference to Logan being at Pan. As much as I enjoy confrontation between them, there is something a lot more powerful about Logan being gobsmacked by her presence while she just doesn't care. Great choice. Loving this fic just as much as Drunk Logan, I'm already checking for updates everyday and we're only two chapters in. Can't wait for more. I'm desperately trying to work out the Cami thing. I've been trying to remember all the alias' Veronica used over the three seasons on cases as I think it has something to do with that, either that or it's some sort of link to Lilly, am I even close? |
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Posts: 24 (03/11/08 19:18:07) |
Absolutely awesome! I love that Mac and Wallace are in it as well, and that everyone loves Veronica so much. I am totally intrigued, and can't wait for
more.
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Posts: 77 (03/26/08 14:55:08) |
Great chapter. Loved the confrontation between Logan and Veronica, especially her being the bigger man about their past and giving him a chance to keep their
friends at Pan but still letting him have it about what he'd done to her.
Loved the explanation about Cami, I had a feeling it was something to do with her P.I. disguises but I never would have thought of the little twist you put on it, great work. I'm interested to see how you write Ritchie and Mac and I'm also taking this chance to put in a request for Wallace to get some action too, guy never got enough love on the show for my liking :) I'm dying to know now why Veronica is rushing off after school every day, and also very excited for more developments in Logans new obssesion with her ;) Loving the fic so far, can't wait for more. Congratulations to your friend on the new baby! |
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Posts: 249 (03/26/08 15:34:19) |
To everyone who has reviewed thus far. You know I love you and check for your reviews. It's my own special kind of high.
Tuesday, my night to put the kids to bed, send the husband to the bedroom. Tuesday, my night to perch, anxiously awaiting the chime of 9:00. The calm, the excitement, the hour when all else fades and there is but one single focus. No jokes, no games, just the intense study of this thing we call LoVe.
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Posts: 76 (03/26/08 19:29:48) |
Wonderful chapter! I just love "Drunk Logan" and I am so looking forward to watching this story unfold.
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Posts: 825 (03/27/08 04:35:09) Logan|Sex&Snark |
I'm so glad to see this updated! I check every single day for an update and was finally rewarded |
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Posts: 250 (03/27/08 08:45:45) |
Hey, now. You know I'd love to tell you, but what fun would that be? Thanks for the review. I think that Logan will come around, but he isn't one to
take a minute in the moment and consider a situation. I think he reacts before thinking. He's still in self-righteous mode regarding the Lilly situation,
but give him some time to stew on it.
Tuesday, my night to put the kids to bed, send the husband to the bedroom. Tuesday, my night to perch, anxiously awaiting the chime of 9:00. The calm, the excitement, the hour when all else fades and there is but one single focus. No jokes, no games, just the intense study of this thing we call LoVe.
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Posts: 13 (03/28/08 16:30:13) |
ahhh i love this story. i like the confrontation between L&V, and i think that you should have Logan apologize to her or something.... and then, they can
kiss and make up and we all know what comes with a makeup....... *raises eyebrows in a suggestive manner*
sooo cute, but DAMN please update more!!!! and congratulations on your baby!!! im sure it's adorable. : ] Love, and update soon! Logan is my Lovah |
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Posts: 18 (03/29/08 14:47:51) |
I love this fic. Please update soon.
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Posts: 19 (03/29/08 14:49:19) |
I love this fic. Please update soon.
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Posts: 827 (04/02/08 16:32:59) Logan|Sex&Snark |
I'm glad that Veronica loves her son above everything else, and even Logan finding out about it didn't really bother her. I'm also bordering on
ecstatic that Logan has actually been thinking about how things happened, and is starting to see things from Veronica's POV. At least, he's starting to
be able to understand why she stood by Keith and is willing to admit to himself that he doesn't really hate her anymore.
I wonder if Logan plans on outright asking Duncan about Veronica being pregnant or if he'll just fish for information? Either way, I'm sure it will eventually come out that Duncan slept with Veronica at Shelley's party and Logan will be the one to break the news to Veronica about Duncan being Keith's father. So many questions and theories! I will be patient and wait for the next update though. I know it took awhile for everything to pan out in DL, and I love that story, so I'll just wait for things to happen as they do in this one 
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