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Nemo	Feedback: Sleeper, I'm Awake	Lead	[-]
Posts: 50 (10/19/06 08:12:07) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Tags : None Feedback can be left here. All comments are very much appreciated. :)
Tishery	Re: Feedback: Sleeper, I'm Awake	#1	[-]
Posts: 79 (10/19/06 13:08:00) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Once again, SO glad you posted this over here, because now I get to tell you what I think. This story, ah, it was great! I loved the idea, and I could buy it too. I liked how Veronica questioned Duncan, because really they were both so druged how could he REALLY know if it'd been this great, loving thing. She couldn't remember it, ANY of it. She'd be so out of it she didn't know who'd taken her into the room, then finds out she was raped BEFORE Duncan, and didn't remember both. Yeah, sorry but he raped her I don't care what RT says. Or anyone else for that matter. I loved it. You did an awsome, bang up, WONDERFUL job with this story. Keep up the great work.
Nemo	Re: Feedback: Sleeper, I'm Awake	#2	[-]
Posts: 50 (10/19/06 13:20:01) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! Yeah, sorry but he raped her I don't care what RT says. Or anyone else for that matter. Hee! I feel the same way! :D
wickeddiva422	Re: Feedback: Sleeper, I'm Awake	#3	[-]
Posts: 349 (10/19/06 13:48:04) LoVe Addicted Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	This really is amazing story and you are an amazing writer. I can't wait to read more of your work and I also am so glad that you decided to post your story here also.
Nemo	Re: Feedback: Sleeper, I'm Awake	#4	[-]
Posts: 50 (10/19/06 14:00:41) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	I'm really glad to hear you like my story! (my new fic "Never be the same again is up here too:)) Thank you so much!
sweepmeoffmyfeet	Re: Feedback: Sleeper, I'm Awake	#5	[-]
Posts: 476 (02/02/07 23:39:27) LoVe Addicted Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Wow that was really good! Awesome story, loved every chapter and your writing skills, WOO! You should definitley write more. I know alot of people would be very interested. banner made by me
Nemo	Re: Feedback: Sleeper, I'm Awake	#6	[-]
Posts: 50 (02/05/07 13:36:06) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Thank you sweepmeoffmmyfeet! I'm really glad you like this story, it was my first and has a special place in my heart. I'm glad to tell you I have continued writing VM and I have another fic (WIP) up now: Underneath It All :) Banner by me (Nemo)
Ablaze13	Sleeper, I'm Awake	#7	[-]
Posts: 55 (02/10/08 16:29:39) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Lovely story. You evoked a very honest tone in your story - your Veronica felt shattered, a bit lost, and bitter. It was heartbreaking and confusing and it hurt in the best of ways. It felt right.

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